I'm working on this screenplay that has taken over my brain. I am living these characters and their world is really dark. I'm sort of scaring myself in that I am coming up with all these twisted things to do to them and that have already been done to them. I'd stop but this is the first time in a long time that the words are just coming to me, flowing out of my fingers onto the screen and I hesitate to let that go.

Anyway, I was getting ready for bed and a plot bunny hit me. Context is not important here, what I am hoping to get from y'all is if this interests you enough to want to know more and if the style works for you. It's in present tense, because that's how you write screenplays and if this works, it may get (kinda) cut and pasted into my Final Draft file. It's not written in dramatic writing style, prose wise, but it can be adapted if it works.

Anyway, if you have the time, give it a whirl and let me know what you think. I've just gotten over a long dry spell of not writing and am really pumping out words regardless of quality. Please, please help me gain a little perspective here.

Thanks so much in advance.